From 0f41c98f8162dc650c11a8d740948c58e37298a4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: fduncanh <fduncanh@gmail.com>
Date: Sat, 4 Jun 2022 01:44:36 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] edit README

---
 README.html | 19 +++++++++----------
 README.md   | 40 +++++++++++++++++++++-------------------
 README.txt  | 20 ++++++++++----------
 3 files changed, 40 insertions(+), 39 deletions(-)

diff --git a/README.html b/README.html
index cb1f18c..a449a15 100644
--- a/README.html
+++ b/README.html
@@ -25,9 +25,9 @@ to select different hardware-appropriate output “videosinks” and
 pipeline).</li>
 <li>Support for server behind a firewall.</li>
 <li><strong>New</strong>: Support for Raspberry Pi, with hardware video
-acceleration by Video4Linux2 (replacement for 32-bit-only OpenMAX, which
-is no longer supported by Raspberry Pi OS). (For GStreamer &lt; 1.22, a
-<a
+acceleration by Video4Linux2 (the replacement for 32-bit-only OpenMAX,
+now unsupported by recent Raspberry Pi distributions). (For GStreamer
+&lt; 1.22, a <a
 href="https://github.com/FDH2/UxPlay/wiki/Gstreamer-Video4Linux2-plugin-patches">patch</a>
 to the GStreamer Video4Linux2 plugin, available in the <a
 href="https://github.com/FDH2/UxPlay/wiki">UxPlay Wiki</a>, is required,
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ href="https://github.com/FDH2/UxPlay/wiki/UxPlay-on-Raspberry-Pi:-success-report
 reports</a>.</li>
 </ul>
 <p>This project is a GPLv3 open source unix AirPlay2 Mirror server for
-Linux, macOS, and *BSD. It was initially developed by <a
+Linux, macOS, and *BSD. It was initially developed by555555555555555 <a
 href="http://github.com/antimof/Uxplay">antimof</a> using code from <a
 href="https://github.com/FD-/RPiPlay">RPiPlay</a>, which in turn derives
 from <a
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ audio) of iOS/iPadOS/macOS clients (iPhones, iPads, MacBooks) in a
 window on the server display (with the possibility of sharing that
 window on screen-sharing applications such as Zoom) on a host running
 Linux, macOS, or other unix. UxPlay supports Apple’s AirPlay 2 protocol
-using “Legacy Pairing”, and some features are missing. (Details of what
+using “Legacy Pairing”, but some features are missing. (Details of what
 is publically known about Apple’s AirPlay 2 protocol can be found <a
 href="https://github.com/SteeBono/airplayreceiver/wiki/AirPlay2-Protocol">here</a>
 and <a href="https://emanuelecozzi.net/docs/airplay2">here</a>).</p>
@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ the server.</strong></li>
 id="possibility-for-using-hardware-accelerated-h264-video-decoding-if-available.">Possibility
 for using hardware-accelerated h264 video-decoding, if available.</h3>
 <p>UxPlay uses <a href="https://gstreamer.freedesktop.org">GStreamer</a>
-Plugins for rendering audio and video, This means that video and audio
+“plugins” for rendering audio and video. This means that video and audio
 are supported “out of the box”, using a choice of plugins. AirPlay
 streams video in h264 format: gstreamer decoding is plugin agnostic, and
 uses accelerated GPU hardware h264 decoders if available; if not,
@@ -100,10 +100,9 @@ software decoding is used.</p>
 <ul>
 <li><p><strong>VAAPI for Intel and AMD integrated graphics, NVIDIA with
 “Nouveau” open-source driver</strong></p>
-<p>With an Intel or AMD GPU, hardware decoding with the gstreamer
-open-source VAAPI gstreamer plugin is preferable. The open-source
-“Nouveau” drivers for NVIDIA graphics are also in principle supported:
-see <a
+<p>With an Intel or AMD GPU, hardware decoding with the open-source
+VAAPI gstreamer plugin is preferable. The open-source “Nouveau” drivers
+for NVIDIA graphics are also in principle supported: see <a
 href="https://nouveau.freedesktop.org/VideoAcceleration.html">here</a>,
 but this requires VAAPI to be supplemented with firmware extracted from
 the proprietary NVIDIA drivers.</p></li>
diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
index 4f54528..9d520b5 100644
--- a/README.md
+++ b/README.md
@@ -21,8 +21,8 @@ Highlights:
      "audiosinks", and a fully-user-configurable video streaming pipeline).
    * Support for server behind a firewall.
    * **New**: Support for Raspberry Pi, with hardware video acceleration by
-     Video4Linux2 (replacement for 32-bit-only OpenMAX, which is no longer
-     supported by Raspberry Pi OS). (For GStreamer < 1.22,
+     Video4Linux2 (the replacement for 32-bit-only OpenMAX, now unsupported by
+     recent Raspberry Pi distributions). (For GStreamer < 1.22,
      a [patch](https://github.com/FDH2/UxPlay/wiki/Gstreamer-Video4Linux2-plugin-patches)
      to the GStreamer Video4Linux2 plugin, available in the
      [UxPlay Wiki](https://github.com/FDH2/UxPlay/wiki), is required, unless
@@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ Highlights:
      See [success reports](https://github.com/FDH2/UxPlay/wiki/UxPlay-on-Raspberry-Pi:-success-reports:).
 
 This project is a GPLv3 open source unix AirPlay2 Mirror server for Linux, macOS, and \*BSD.
-It was initially developed by
+It was initially developed by555555555555555
 [antimof](http://github.com/antimof/Uxplay) using code 
 from [RPiPlay](https://github.com/FD-/RPiPlay), which in turn derives from
 [AirplayServer](https://github.com/KqsMea8/AirplayServer),
@@ -47,7 +47,8 @@ Its main use is to act like an AppleTV for screen-mirroring (with audio) of iOS/
 (iPhones, iPads, MacBooks) in a window
 on the server display (with the possibility of
 sharing that window on screen-sharing applications such as Zoom)
-on a host running Linux, macOS, or other unix.  UxPlay supports Apple's AirPlay 2 protocol using "Legacy Pairing", and some features are missing.
+on a host running Linux, macOS, or other unix.  UxPlay supports Apple's AirPlay 2
+protocol using "Legacy Pairing", but some features are missing.
 (Details of what is publically known about Apple's AirPlay 2 protocol can be found
 [here](https://github.com/SteeBono/airplayreceiver/wiki/AirPlay2-Protocol) and
 [here](https://emanuelecozzi.net/docs/airplay2)).
@@ -79,17 +80,19 @@ streaming it to the client, and then re-streaming to the server.**
 
 ### Possibility for using hardware-accelerated h264 video-decoding, if available.
 
-UxPlay uses [GStreamer](https://gstreamer.freedesktop.org) Plugins for rendering audio and video,
-This means that video and audio are supported "out of the box", using a choice of plugins.
-AirPlay streams video in h264 format: gstreamer decoding is plugin agnostic, and uses accelerated GPU hardware
-h264 decoders if available; if not, software decoding is used. 
+UxPlay uses [GStreamer](https://gstreamer.freedesktop.org) "plugins" for rendering
+audio and video.  This means that video and audio are supported "out of the box",
+using a choice of plugins.  AirPlay streams video in h264 format: gstreamer decoding
+is plugin agnostic, and uses accelerated GPU hardware h264 decoders if available;
+if not, software decoding is used. 
 
 * **VAAPI for Intel and AMD integrated graphics, NVIDIA with "Nouveau" open-source driver**
 
-   With an Intel or AMD GPU,  hardware decoding with the gstreamer open-source VAAPI gstreamer plugin is preferable.
-   The open-source "Nouveau" drivers for NVIDIA
-   graphics are also in principle supported: see [here](https://nouveau.freedesktop.org/VideoAcceleration.html),
-   but this requires  VAAPI to be supplemented with firmware extracted from the proprietary NVIDIA drivers.
+   With an Intel or AMD GPU,  hardware decoding with the open-source VAAPI gstreamer
+   plugin is preferable.   The open-source "Nouveau" drivers for NVIDIA graphics are
+   also in principle supported:
+   see [here](https://nouveau.freedesktop.org/VideoAcceleration.html), but this requires
+   VAAPI to be supplemented with firmware extracted from the proprietary NVIDIA drivers.
 
 * **NVIDIA with proprietary drivers**
 
@@ -106,13 +109,12 @@ h264 decoders if available; if not, software decoding is used.
 *  **Video4Linux2 support for the Raspberry Pi Broadcom GPU**
 
     Raspberry Pi (RPi) computers can run UxPlay with software decoding
-    of h264 video but this 
-    usually has unacceptable latency, and hardware-accelerated GPU decoding 
-    should be used.  Distributions such as  RPi OS (Bullseye) release have
-    recently dropped support for 32-bit-only OpenMAX (omx) GPU decoding (used by RPiPlay), in
-    favor of Video4Linux2 (v4l2). Fixes to the GStreamer v4l2 plugin that allow it to
-    work with UxPlay on RPi are now in the GStreamer development
-    branch, and will appear in the upcoming GStreamer-1.22 release.
+    of h264 video but this usually has unacceptable latency, and hardware-accelerated
+    GPU decoding should be used.  Distributions such as RPi OS (Bullseye) release have
+    recently dropped support for 32-bit-only OpenMAX (omx) GPU decoding (used by RPiPlay),
+    in favor of Video4Linux2 (v4l2). Fixes to the GStreamer v4l2 plugin that allow it to
+    work with UxPlay on RPi are now in the GStreamer development branch, and will appear
+    in the upcoming GStreamer-1.22 release.
     A (partial) backport (as `gstreamer1.0-plugins-good-1.18.4-2+~rpt1`)
     has already appeared in RPi OS updates. Until the full update
     appears, or for other distributions, you can find
diff --git a/README.txt b/README.txt
index a899179..b75abd6 100644
--- a/README.txt
+++ b/README.txt
@@ -21,8 +21,9 @@ Highlights:
     pipeline).
 -   Support for server behind a firewall.
 -   **New**: Support for Raspberry Pi, with hardware video acceleration
-    by Video4Linux2 (replacement for 32-bit-only OpenMAX, which is no
-    longer supported by Raspberry Pi OS). (For GStreamer \< 1.22, a
+    by Video4Linux2 (the replacement for 32-bit-only OpenMAX, now
+    unsupported by recent Raspberry Pi distributions). (For GStreamer \<
+    1.22, a
     [patch](https://github.com/FDH2/UxPlay/wiki/Gstreamer-Video4Linux2-plugin-patches)
     to the GStreamer Video4Linux2 plugin, available in the [UxPlay
     Wiki](https://github.com/FDH2/UxPlay/wiki), is required, unless your
@@ -31,7 +32,7 @@ Highlights:
     reports](https://github.com/FDH2/UxPlay/wiki/UxPlay-on-Raspberry-Pi:-success-reports:).
 
 This project is a GPLv3 open source unix AirPlay2 Mirror server for
-Linux, macOS, and \*BSD. It was initially developed by
+Linux, macOS, and \*BSD. It was initially developed by555555555555555
 [antimof](http://github.com/antimof/Uxplay) using code from
 [RPiPlay](https://github.com/FD-/RPiPlay), which in turn derives from
 [AirplayServer](https://github.com/KqsMea8/AirplayServer),
@@ -52,7 +53,7 @@ of iOS/iPadOS/macOS clients (iPhones, iPads, MacBooks) in a window on
 the server display (with the possibility of sharing that window on
 screen-sharing applications such as Zoom) on a host running Linux,
 macOS, or other unix. UxPlay supports Apple's AirPlay 2 protocol using
-"Legacy Pairing", and some features are missing. (Details of what is
+"Legacy Pairing", but some features are missing. (Details of what is
 publically known about Apple's AirPlay 2 protocol can be found
 [here](https://github.com/SteeBono/airplayreceiver/wiki/AirPlay2-Protocol)
 and [here](https://emanuelecozzi.net/docs/airplay2)).
@@ -85,8 +86,8 @@ Mirror mode connection.*
 
 ### Possibility for using hardware-accelerated h264 video-decoding, if available.
 
-UxPlay uses [GStreamer](https://gstreamer.freedesktop.org) Plugins for
-rendering audio and video, This means that video and audio are supported
+UxPlay uses [GStreamer](https://gstreamer.freedesktop.org) "plugins" for
+rendering audio and video. This means that video and audio are supported
 "out of the box", using a choice of plugins. AirPlay streams video in
 h264 format: gstreamer decoding is plugin agnostic, and uses accelerated
 GPU hardware h264 decoders if available; if not, software decoding is
@@ -95,10 +96,9 @@ used.
 -   **VAAPI for Intel and AMD integrated graphics, NVIDIA with "Nouveau"
     open-source driver**
 
-    With an Intel or AMD GPU, hardware decoding with the gstreamer
-    open-source VAAPI gstreamer plugin is preferable. The open-source
-    "Nouveau" drivers for NVIDIA graphics are also in principle
-    supported: see
+    With an Intel or AMD GPU, hardware decoding with the open-source
+    VAAPI gstreamer plugin is preferable. The open-source "Nouveau"
+    drivers for NVIDIA graphics are also in principle supported: see
     [here](https://nouveau.freedesktop.org/VideoAcceleration.html), but
     this requires VAAPI to be supplemented with firmware extracted from
     the proprietary NVIDIA drivers.